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Critique is encouraged. I know very little about composition.
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motzhoeld Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
i really like the colors and the landscape in this photo
there is however something that is bugging me: the left end of the photo (especially the corners) is very dark and you loose a lot of details there. and i don't know what the landscape looks like, but imho the tree is too much in the center, so a little turn left maybe would have brought a better perspective. but i don't know :D
but i really like the colors and the geass and the feeling when i'm looking at this picture :)
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charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed, there are a lot of problems with this picture; that is why I don't like this very much. Thank you for your insight.

I will remember this for future pictures. You are totally right about the composition; I am very ignorant in that respect.
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CharlotteBuschmann Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Student Photographer
Wonderful Colors!
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:bow:
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:iconcharlottebuschmann:
CharlotteBuschmann Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Student Photographer
:)
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Sabbelbina Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
You've been featured: [link]
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the feature!
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:iconsabbelbina:
Sabbelbina Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:tighthug:
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SuperSnappz Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh now this is how i imagine heaven to be like.
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charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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:iconnawalackermann:
NawalAckermann Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Professional Photographer
Amazing colors! I love this shot :)
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod:
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:not:
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VaAlves94 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Student Photographer
wow.. such a lovely view.. :O love it love this pic. one day ill visit canada ^^
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:bow:
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:iconbluemalou:
blueMALOU Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
No words.Very spectacular.Great great job! Im proud of your work:D:D:Check out my gallery,too.
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, thank you.
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:iconbluemalou:
blueMALOU Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconrbyw: :iconlovecuddleplz:
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SigridAT Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011
Oh my god, this is so beautiful!
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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TheLoveTrain Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011
Gorgeous colors ... a lovely capture to be sure. :)

If you will, please take a minute to click on my 'All Art' group avatar, below. I'd much like for you to exhibit all of your exceptional creations with us and I'm convinced others would, too. See our brief front-left page "Fundamentals" section for more. We've automatic membership and artwork approvals, and much fun there as well.

Thanks for so freely sharing and I hope to see you again sometime, Dani.

~Brian :heart:
Founder: Doctrinaire

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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, thank you for your invitation! I'll definitely check out your group.
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:iconthelovetrain:
TheLoveTrain Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011
I'm still trying to determine how I previously came up with the name of Dani ... :confused: :no:

Anyway, I'm sorry about that, 'Ermek'. Thanks for being such a nice guy about it, and for joining us. I'm glad to have you here. You're very welcome and have a great time. I'll see you around. :) :heart:
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charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, that's fine.


I'll see you around as well. I'm looking forward to having a great time.
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FaerieBert Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful. :D
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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:iconfaeriebert:
FaerieBert Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome. :)
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:iconkayandjay100:
kayandjay100 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What a stunning capture! :deviation: :camera: :rose: Coco
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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:iconkayandjay100:
kayandjay100 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My pleasure! :rose: Coco
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Gem-of-cali Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is lovely. It looks so peaceful there. I am enjoying viewing this photo very much.
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you.
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Gem-of-cali Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconlittledrag0nfly: :iconwelcome1plz::iconwelcome2plz::iconwelcome3plz::iconwelcome4plz::iconstarlightie:
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:iconbobby-canon:
Bobby-Canon Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful calm relaxing photo.
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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ShamanQueen1994 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
very nice
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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ShamanQueen1994 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
no problem
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XanthicAmber Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
lovely!
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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elcons Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
And we could say : "Once upon a time..."
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed!
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:iconorkideh84:
Orkideh84 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh I love these colors. It's so beautiful, especially watching the sunset around the nature.
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, they are quite wonderful, aren't they?
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:iconorkideh84:
Orkideh84 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes, they are. <3
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:iconval-faustino:
Val-Faustino Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful shot :clap:
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charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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donna-j Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
lovely......I live in Oshawa, ontario. Hi to you.
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:iconcharcoalfeather:
charcoalfeather Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi! Thanks.
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donna-j Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
NP!
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